This activity was about having things as your password. What I enjoyed about this was having rainbow font. I look forward to you feedback so please leave a comment below.
Hi Ryleigh, I like the way you made it colourful even with the words. You took me back to when I saw a rainbow. Maybe next time you could do some colourful colours than all colourful colours.
WOAH! Ryleigh, I just got to say my eyes would EXPLODE with all those COLOURS looking back at me. Did you even think about putting more designs? Just to help you out, maybe next time you do a google drawing, make a comic strip.:P ;)
Hi Ryleigh I liked your passwords slide with it talking about what people should not give anyone your details. Did you think about making the the font a little bit bigger? Next time you could add some more longer sentences
Hi Ryleigh I liked the way you did the colour it’s colourful. It reminded of the rainbow. Next time you could make more colourful. I hope you like my comment.
Hi ryleigh.liked the way you added a lot of color in to the password Thing.did you think about making some of it black.next time you could Make the color of the words black.
Hi Ryleigh, Great job! I like your passwords google drawing wonderful. All those colours are nice and bright like a rainbow. I think that information is great for just year 1. Please leave a reply on this comment. I hope you do.
Hi Ryleigh I like your colours you used. I like the colours on the writing and I like the colours on the lines . background and maybe you can put summing on. your Blog. and did you put your Turning neagatiu into positiue.from lex.
Hi Ryleigh, I like the way you made it colourful even with the words.
ReplyDeleteYou took me back to when I saw a rainbow.
Maybe next time you could do some colourful colours than all colourful colours.
Hi Taya! Thank you for the help. You really helped me to change things. Thank you.
DeleteWOAH! Ryleigh, I just got to say my eyes would EXPLODE with all those COLOURS looking back at me.
ReplyDeleteDid you even think about putting more designs?
Just to help you out, maybe next time you do a google drawing, make a comic strip.:P ;)
Hi Kaizer! Thank you for helping me out to change. also thanks for positive, helpful and thoughtful comment.
DeleteNo worreys bro.
DeleteHi Ryleigh liked the way you did not do your password 12345678 for the password because that would be too simple for anyone to get on your chromebook.
ReplyDeleteHi Abhi! and yes people can get in to my Chromebook so easily.
DeleteHi Ryleigh I liked your passwords slide with it talking about what people should not give anyone your details. Did you think about making the the font a little bit bigger? Next time you could add some more longer sentences
ReplyDeleteHey Josiah! Thank you for making me change some things. And also people can get into my Chromebook and see my details.
DeleteHi Ryleigh I liked the way you did the colour it’s colourful. It reminded of the rainbow. Next time you could make more colourful. I hope you like my comment.
ReplyDeleteHi lauren! Thank you for the nice comment and yes i will try to make it more colourful. I do like your comment.
DeleteHi ryleigh.liked the way you added a lot of color in to the password
ReplyDeleteThing.did you think about making some of it black.next time you could
Make the color of the words black.
Hey Brooklyn. thank you for the comment. I can try do what you ask for.
DeleteHi Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I like your passwords google drawing wonderful.
All those colours are nice and bright like a rainbow.
I think that information is great for just year 1. Please leave a reply on this comment. I hope you do.
Hi Ryleigh I like your colours you used. I like the colours on the writing and I like the colours on the lines . background and maybe you can put summing on. your Blog. and did you put your Turning neagatiu into positiue.from lex.
ReplyDeleteHi Lex! thank you for the comment. you made me change stuff alot
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